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Wednesday, 18 March 2020

The Bomb by Sacha Cotter

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We have been learning about using exclamation marks in our writing. We learnt exclamation marks are used to express a strong emotion. We drew our own bomb pictures and then put words or short sentences on our picture which could have an exclamation mark. Here are some examples below:
By Summer

By Sofia

By Moana

4 comments:

  1. I am a year 4 stdent at Paroa school in the south island. I really like the words and drawings you used in your "bomb" pictures, its bright and colorful and really stands out.

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  2. you have really good drawing skills.

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  3. Him my name is pera from paroa school in the south island .I love all your drawing they look great.My favourite thing about all the drawings is the sea creatures in the sea they look great and real.for next time you could tel as something about the drawings.I love all the drawings

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  4. hi my name is connor and i am in the south island at paroa school great work

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Thank you for your positive, thoughtful, helpful comments.
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